Ruby-Ace

Hello fellow Eorzean,
          
          I have caught eye on your story and hope you keep up your work. I quite enjoyed reading it. A bit of advice for your upcoming chapters, make sure to make a new paragraph for each new dialogue. It will help the story flow on whose talking.
          
          May you ever walk in the light of the crystal.

DarkCloudNightmare

@AC-Cantrell Oh goodness, I've just seen this! >.< 
            But thank you for the advice. I'm glad you like the story so far! ^^
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