NotFlame7
@DarkLordOblivion nice story, but extend ur descriptions a bit more to make the story's intro clear!! Nice vocabulary, but don't use Google! In some places the synonyms don't make sense...That's it !! great start da!
NotFlame7
@DarkLordOblivion I did not say that u used Google! I said don't use Google, or else the synonyms won't make sense!! :)