@SapphireSkyes, you're welcome! Don't be offended if I take it off (I don't know if people get notifications for that, I've never published anything), I'm really big on editing and grammar, so sometimes I find it hard to read things that aren't grammatically correct or not written correctly. But I think I'll like your story, the description was very intriguing and edited well enough that I didn't notice many flaws (after 'Hunger Games' in the first sentence there should be a comma).