Ashlee

@Tattoo_Kowalski_93 you're welcome. Both of your books are awesome!

Thanks for the vote on my book love❤️❤️

@Rachiiee123 Awesome I will :D
          

@Rachiiee123 yeah it does, espeacially seeing as how you are obviously a girl. Boys are different, the speak, walk, talk differently. so creating a character that's 100% fiction of the opposite sex is going to be more difficult. I have the same problem, i spend a lot of time observing people because of that. And imagining the ways i want my person to be like.

@Rachiiee123 I only have one character I truely base off of my friends and that's Mitch from Just Super. But my main character is always a lil like me but to an extreme version because I'm a lil too mellow most of the time. 

@Rachiiee123 lol no problemo. i banter ideas off with my friend. or i just go about and write down funny conversations i've had with people and if its similar to how my characters would react i'll use them.

@Rachiiee123 haha well i'm glad to have helped :] the hardest part about writing is coming up with ideas.
          

@Rachiiee123 sweet! :D yeah i think it has twists, i don't think you've brought them out yet, but i'm sure theres a reason as to how her dad knows she's an angel; if her biological mom is somehow involved with her being an angel, or nephilim, or i'm not quite sure which yet, which can be a twist in itself. and i'm curious as to why the dad loves the step-mom, i mean, the step mom seems nice (as of now) so i can't imagine how she fell for such an evil man. 

@Rachiiee123 yeah i'm really excited about how you'll handle that other dimension in the woods and if they'll run away together or what not. you have a lot of potential in your story and it's well paced; not too fast, not too slow. it's awesome. a lot of stories go too fast on this website, and it's like "woah, slow down, i feel like i missed 5 chapters!"

@Rachiiee123   Lol very true! I just thought u should know I'm stoked for ur next update haha.