DarkWorld336

New update out - Ch 22 ✅⚡
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/396313204

DarkWorld336

21st chapter is out ❌‼️☠️
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/396313204

sweetybala

@DarkWorld336 okk thanks for replying and I really love your story keep going it’s one of the favourite book❤️
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sweetybala

@DarkWorld336 It’s not opening
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DarkWorld336

@sweetybala it's technical clich.
            
            I will post today.
            
            And keep supporting sweetie ..
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meniju

Your writing, dialogues, characters everything was good...I just read vedant's world and wondered there were merely any votes and comments in the chapter.... Everything was good but u exaggerate things like overly exaggerate karna he to max 50 chapters mei hosakta tha vo story and it was too slow literally bohot slow tha pace of the story...Just these 2 things otherwise u are great at writing..all the best :)

meniju

@DarkWorld336 Definitely I'll give it a try...Rooting for u :)
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DarkWorld336

@meniju if you loved it ****
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DarkWorld336

@meniju tnx for your genuine feedback.
            
            And that was my first story dear and I'm not pro writer at all..
            
            And you can check it out season 2..you won't found those mistakes again.
            
            Precisely it will 25-30 chapters. Then it will end..
            
            And please do vote and comment and share this story of you loved it . ☺️.
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