agatharoza

I have no idea how on earth did you find me but YOU ARE AWESOME!!! Thank you so much for putting Entwined into your reading list♡ I hope you’ll have amazing day cos you just made mine!! It’s my baby and I really appreciate your support cos I know how it feels like to have none ♡   P.s. have fun finding clues and solving the mystery! ♡

Dark_Angel4780

@Always_Obrien I was not trying to offend you at all and I apologize that my opinion and questions of your book did I was just trying to find out what style you were intending the book to be read in and to clear up my confusing on the beginning with hopes mom and then I just offered my opinion because you asked for feedback

Dark_Angel4780

@Always_Obrien ok so when you were writing I don't know if it was for just generally readers or for younger readers ? but in the beginning the scene with hopes mom I felt a little confused why she would beg for help when she was trying to protect her in the first place and the the sexual scene I was confused because I felt it didn't go with the plot it felt to innocent and lacked detail. Also I don't know what way your going with this book but if  you compare the sexual scenes in crown the bad boy and the wine list, the wine list sexual fit the story it wasn't to innocent or to naughty it was just right and gave the right amount of details to focus on but crown the bad boy was very awkward lacked detail and wasn't a smooth transition from scene to scene. Also I read the wine list and I loved the plot and character twist but also the sexual fit the story it wasn't to innocent or to naughty it was just right and gave the right amount of details to focus on. So hopefully you can answer my question and take into consideration my opinions ♥