@Briethecheese13 I'm glad. I comment as a way of showing my support, you know, as in I am really into the story, so don't mind any of my comments where I am reacting too harshly to the characters, I am not criticizing, just too hyped, kinda like when watching a movie you would talk to the TV, you know And you really have potential, you should continue your writing, explore your writing style more. I am really excited to read the rest, I would try as soon as I have some free time. Until next time, take care
