Marsh green

If anyones interested, I am writing a book and would love some feed back and constructive criticism!! 

This is my first story so it's gonna be a little rought https://www.wattpad.com/story/122988799

Hello!! Would you please check out my stories if you like? It'd really mean a lot to me.

Hey Potato lol!! Would you mind checking out my book for me? it's boyxboy!!!

@ms_ethandolan Why thank you *_*