sakeyna

          
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          Would u like to support my book 'Seth Astill' too 

https://my.w.tt/7ri1ql5Eibb
          
          This is something I wrote when I was 14 something so edited and posted it again , without ruining what my 14 year old self could come up with.

https://my.w.tt/jfUc6Mdyibb
          
          Edited:3

thank you very much @hiphop_sak for all your generous vote. thanks mate.your poems are incredibly awesome:)

@ProblematicGeek anytym..:)

Thank you soooo much for all ur votes . It's very supportive. I will make sure I check up out ur poems in sha Allah;)❤️❤️

@Noorul_ayn aww  mubarrakallah...thnx fr urz too swty thy meant alot aswl =)

Thanks alot for adding my book in your reading list.☺☺

Your poems are lovely. They express a lot but as a fellow poet I's like to advice you on a few things. 
          Not all poems need to rhyme. Raw feelings in poetry is good but hiding it and portraying it in inanimate objects is better but your approach is not bad. Be mindful of grammar. I know it's a nuisance to type every letter of every word but it's worth it because someday people will use your words to express their feelings. All the love ~ NN

@ishtar_2_4_98 yeah sure i will :)