DarthAsh18

I’d love to hear some feedback on Snake Skin if anyone still reads that

CoraSalzmann

I don’t see any issues other than the occasional misspelling of a word 
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DarthAsh18

@CoraSalzmann any kind of criticism, notes or suggestions you wanna put out there? 
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CoraSalzmann

It’s really good so I don’t see a reason to stop now 
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DarthAsh18

I’d love to hear some feedback on Snake Skin if anyone still reads that

CoraSalzmann

I don’t see any issues other than the occasional misspelling of a word 
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DarthAsh18

@CoraSalzmann any kind of criticism, notes or suggestions you wanna put out there? 
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CoraSalzmann

It’s really good so I don’t see a reason to stop now 
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DarthAsh18

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Imagine if all the vassals to outer gods in Elden Ring beefed with each other. You have Radagon, lord of frenzied flame, Malenia and Mohg all beating the shit out of each other in a massive free for all

DarthAsh18

Just posted my first ever yokai watch fanfic and I’d love any feedback 

Link_121

@DarthAsh18 ok well I hope that Katie discorvers that Nate is a yokia relatively early on, but for chapter three Katie going through what Nate did in episode one  would make sense minus Dismarelda
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DarthAsh18

@Link_121 you’re the only person to actually give any kind of feedback so if you have any notes or ideas for the story, feel free to share 
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