Hi!
I’m really glad my story caught your interest, even though the first chapters were pretty bad!
I’d love to hear your feedback—please let me know what you didn’t like so I can improve!
And I’d also appreciate it if you could tell me what you think about parts 19, 20, 21 and 22.
That’s really important to me, because from that point on, the story takes a much darker, more psychological turn :)