DarthKirby

Hey guys! I updated my fantasy story! :3 Tell me what you guys think of the new chapter or if you haven't read through the whole story yet, what you think of what you've read so far.

Inosukma_Hashiballs

Poyo, poyo? (So you must be another me, huh?)

DarthKirby

@K1RB3E new friends are always welcome. lol
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Inosukma_Hashiballs

Poyo! Poyo? (Cool! Wanna be friends?)
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DarthKirby

@K1RB3E Darth Kirby! I sucked up an emo Sith Lord and now I’m very forceful. :-P
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Anneshiningstar

I love your take on how we can believe in God without using the Bible, I wasn't looking for it (was actually rereading runaway princess) but it's exactly what I was thinking about yesterday. Also in C.S. Lewis' book 'mere Christianity ' he offers a reason for this by using man's ideas of morality, but this scientific aproach is great, because I often find that when Christians are challenged they do not know how to justify their beliefs, especially when aproached by someone with more knowledge than themselves. I cringe when I recall our chemistry teacher trying to convince us that we are fools for believing in "that story book", that was what first made me want to investigate how I could justify what I believe.

DarthKirby

I'm glad I could help bring some useful information for you. My hope is that it will help many more as well. :-)
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HouaYang9

Hey DarthKirby, I was wondering if you could go and check out my story I had just posted up and tell me what you think about it. I'm still new at this so I would like for someone more experienced than I to help me out a bit.

DarthKirby

Just to give you fair warning, I'm a grammar nazi, so I'll likely point out a lot of small errors unless there are tons of the same errors.
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Kutalia

Hey
          
          Wassup 
          
          Hello 
          
          Can you please read my horror book and tell me what you think? I would tell you the title of the book, but I kinda want you to save that reaction. It'd mean a whole box of cereal to me if you could read it and stuff. anyway, THANKS 
          
          peace, love, and chicken grease

DarthKirby

I would, it's just that I don't read horror or erotica. If you have any other books not in those genres, I will be happy to give feedback if I have time.
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Kutalia

@Kutalia I just now realized you are a Grammar Nazi. Eh whatever. The book is a rough draft.
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DarthKirby

@everyone Hey guys, I know it's been awhile, but I finally updated my fantasy novel, The Tales of Chronica: The Guardian's War. Check it out if you want some epic adventure reading. :3 P.s. In my personal opinion, this is one of my better chapters in terms of writing craft.