Legendanthony
“This is disturbingly elegant writing—rich, atmospheric, and psychologically sharp. The narrator’s voice is unsettling in the best way, blending refinement with delusion. You’ve built tension slowly, letting the horror seep through gestures, smells, and silences rather than jump scares. The bride’s first appearance is beautifully eerie, and her intelligence cuts through the scene like a blade. The family’s fear, the narrator’s arrogance, and the undercurrent of something ancient make this feel like the beginning of a gothic masterpiece. It’s intimate, haunting, and deeply compelling
Legendanthony
@DarumaRU Ohh that's sounds cool, I ask because I work in digital art professionally, so your cast really caught my attention. Got a couple of visual ideas that might fit your world — but I don’t want to clutter your comments. If you’d like to exchange concepts with me so we could continue the rest conversation on our socials, mail.or etc?
DarumaRU
@Legendanthony My characters are woven into the visuals of the clips on my channel. The bride is the singer in the green frames who is petting the dragon. I started posting another story, horror, but not Victorian
Legendanthony
@DarumaRU It's cool tbh I like it looking forward for more^^, Well do you post visuals/refs for you characters somewhere? I'd love to see how you imagine them.