Last Of The Real Ones

I liked how you did the fourth chapter where they got literally sucked into the game. I have done descriptive scenes before that involved that scenario (twice. But 2023’s one is much better than the 2016 one)

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Hello! I just wanted to say hi and that I really really liked your book Adopted by Jake Paul and Adopted By JB! Keep it up!
          
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          Lazy 

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Hi! I'm a new writer with a new book and I was hoping you could check out my SP fanfic and maybe give tips and/ or your opinion? (Nice background header)

 #SlytherinFTW I took the official quiz on Pottermore.com