Dav2607

"Well... I wasn't at Crosby I was actually just passing through Wellsworth and when the soviets came, I immediately made a run for it. As I approached the junction near Crosby, I saw Albert race past with a goods train, he was running so fast that he didn't realize that the line he was on had been damaged. Albert tried to break, but it was too late as a missile was launched towards him, he was launched off the rails some. As I rushed past him, splintered wood from his trucks flew everywhere and some of them gave me a few cuts. And all I could hear were his screams and gun shots which meant that he was goner. I continued to run until I saw my tunnel coming up, so I braked and hid in there for about an hour or 2 I'd say before going up to Knapford where Thomas found me. After that, well you already know."
          	
          	"Jeez, Thomas wasn't lying when he said you hit it hard."
          	
          	" I just can't get his screams out of my head. 
          	
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SuePodgorski

@Dav2607 Peak is coming.
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John6840

Hey Dax I have a idea maybe in the next few chapters one of the Marklin engines has a small arch and soon joins the survivors or have the survivors capture one of the Marklin engines
          
          Also: u can have the survivors meeting the Mid Sodor engines as the line to the little western was built during the Nwr formation and whatever happened to the last coffee pots that ran the quarry tramroad

John6840

Okie also with the w&s names being Ruben, Theodore, Julius, and Willie will u change Walter , Winnie and Horace’s names
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Dav2607

@John6840 I'm not doing that, sorry. This is my story and I already have a plan for what to do with them
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John6840

Hi I have a question what makes an good au

John6840

Okie thx. I will try and use it when I make a new au
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Dav2607

@John6840 Mainly: 
            - Originality(meaning you don't copy paste everything from someone else and use your own ideas and research on movies or tv shows for inspiration.)
            - Logical plot lines: Like for example Percy escapes from Gordon who is the villian but Thomas doesn't. You need to have a good explaination on your character's stories and don't add random plot armour out of no where.
            - Correct grammar is a priority.
            - Character deaths must make sense
            and lastly villians need a true reason to attack Sodor.
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Dav2607

"Well... I wasn't at Crosby I was actually just passing through Wellsworth and when the soviets came, I immediately made a run for it. As I approached the junction near Crosby, I saw Albert race past with a goods train, he was running so fast that he didn't realize that the line he was on had been damaged. Albert tried to break, but it was too late as a missile was launched towards him, he was launched off the rails some. As I rushed past him, splintered wood from his trucks flew everywhere and some of them gave me a few cuts. And all I could hear were his screams and gun shots which meant that he was goner. I continued to run until I saw my tunnel coming up, so I braked and hid in there for about an hour or 2 I'd say before going up to Knapford where Thomas found me. After that, well you already know."
          
          "Jeez, Thomas wasn't lying when he said you hit it hard."
          
          " I just can't get his screams out of my head. 
          
          Sneak peek for the next chapter of Target Number 1

SuePodgorski

@Dav2607 Peak is coming.
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