Daveiel

Guys !!!pls help I don't knw wat has happened.   My story is vanished .... I have no draft and nothing nil.i M so angry. ...I don't knw wat to do ....pls help and suggest guys.    

Niveditha_Shetty

Hey. I did read your book. The first two chapters seem to have a few grammatical errors and you haven't used capital letters after full stops. But, the last two chapters are perfect. I like the way how you've explained a simple thing as small as her perfume. All the best:) 

Daveiel

@Niveditha_Shetty  hey thnxxx for reading ..I have updated some chapters lately...  pls read and comment accordingly ...your vote will be appreciated ... thnxx
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