Davejesuo1234

It is enjoyable

https://www.wattpad.com/story/368832008
          
          Read my fantasy romance story and share to your friends! You'll enjoy it!

Hey! It's your friend! I like your story BUT- There are too many commas, some spelling mistakes and your use of English is quite bad. You can do better! I really like your story. It has a great background so improve to make it more interesting.