Shivran86

Thank you for giving Dhampir of Kalika a chance ❤️ Hope you will enjoy it!

DaveyHawkes

@Shivran86 I'll stay in touch :)
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Shivran86

@DaveyHawkes i would be so happy, yes!
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DaveyHawkes

@Shivran86 Maybe, after exams are over and if you'd like, I could help with some aesthetics for the characters? Just a thought :)
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elodiezielle

soniayaduvanshi

Hello/Namaste!
          Sorry for disturbing.
          I hope you're taking care of yourself.
          If you want to read a realistic story, please check out this beautiful story of my dear friend.I'm sure it will not fail to impress you.
          Thank you for letting me disturb you.
          Bye!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/272736667?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Sonalinefelibata&wp_originator=4I5Yca8pT5uY8b5uT6yuLDlh2iqLLrMEKR64PJ0pRS9g0EshNsSAr9j59ez6v2MazmvvYW26QQmHZJAhXUponlUm9x%2F6RS8MXKnqoO7TrbtyB%2Bn7OaHR4V4BFKLgvCDN

DaveyHawkes

@Feeha_20 Please don't take this in a wrong way. Consider this constructive criticism, I read the first few chapters and they're interesting, but I found that many a times, some parts of the dialogue are not in double quotations. It would be great if you could look into that and rectify it :)

stylish_marwari

DaveyHawkes

@stylish_marwari Hey, the plot is amazing and Neer are the best 
            I just have one suggestion, please don't take it in a bad way. It would be great if you didn't name the chapters as 'where he/she did something'. I mean, I would rather like the name of a chapter as 'the kiss' or anything else that you like. Basically, something other than where etc etc happens :)
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stylish_marwari

@DaveyHawkes hey, thanks for reading. Do leave your feedback and suggest this book to your friends to help me!! Happy reading 
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DaveyHawkes

@stylish_marwari Hello, I started reading your book today, and I've completed about 10 chapters now. Your book is really nice. Do keep writing! I'll be eagerly reading this book :)
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mishapurohit

Merry Christmas, buddy! I noticed your votes on my book. Thank you for showering love on my book. I hope you enjoyed reading the book as much as I enjoyed writing it.
          
          Love,
          Misha❤️

mishapurohit

@DaveyHawkes I appreciate your support :)
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DaveyHawkes

@mishapurohit Hey! Merry Christmas! Your book is absolutely lovely. The way you have depicted everything and made it relatable is something I liked quite a lot. All the best for your writing journey ahead! I wish to read other books like this one of yours if you plan of writing in the future :)
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Devilish_grinner

Thanks a lot for voting on my Book. I really hope that you loved it. Feel free to vote, share and comment your thoughts.
          Love,
          A girl with a devilish grin✧

Devilish_grinner

@DaveyHawkes yeah I totally understand (θ‿θ)
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DaveyHawkes

@Devilish_grinner Hey, I absolutely loved the way you write. But unfortunately, it got a bit too intense for me and thus, I had to quit the book. My apologies for the same.
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