DavidCunninghamJr

Hello my closest 19 advites (which I mean as adherents and advocates, but upon investigation, I find that Urban Dictionary has already tacked it with a different meaning. I will not backtrack.) I will not be adding to Universal Peril for a while, because I have received good advice and am going to edit what I have written so far. Have good days ahead of you and smell the roses. Good bye

Geek_Girl4892

Where is your story Universal Peril?

DavidCunninghamJr

@Einstein_Abigail I unpublished it while I edit it. Please keep reading it, but for now I'm taking the critiques that I've got and trying to improve the beginning... doing this before I go any further. Also, I found a sweet app called story creator planner. It helps you develop characters so I'm doing that right now. 
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DavidCunninghamJr

Hello my closest 19 advites (which I mean as adherents and advocates, but upon investigation, I find that Urban Dictionary has already tacked it with a different meaning. I will not backtrack.) I will not be adding to Universal Peril for a while, because I have received good advice and am going to edit what I have written so far. Have good days ahead of you and smell the roses. Good bye

Mariagreen28

good luck

DavidCunninghamJr

@Mariagreen28 Well at least now I know.
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