@DavidGibbs6
Bird of the Gods chapter 3 is up and if you're following along you can find it here.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/325714704
If you haven't been following then it's not too late and you can start here.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/325675473
Come and see what it looks like when 16 writers collaborate and Don't forget to check out the @adultfiction profile
Have you ever read a serialized novel? Would you like to?
I have been working with a group of talented authors on a novel called Bird of the Gods. It's an archaeological, action/adventure, treasure hunt story with a little romance along the way.
Written with 16 other authors, my chapter dropped today and follows @basketballdemon's excellent chapter 1. The next chapter will be released in 4 days and will be found on @Jinnis profile.
So follow the leads across wattpad to read the whole novel as it's released.
Don't forget to check out the @adultfiction profile for authors interviews and more on this Writer's Relay project.
Thanks for adding 'Gloves Up' to your reading list.
Woo! Good luck for the Gloves Up smack down. I was tempted to dive in too, but still had the Ultimate SciFi smackdown to survive. All the best. Looking forward to the next story; you’ve a great writing style! :) Thanks for the follow.
Hi, I saw your vote on Win-Win, thank you so much for checking it out. Hope you stick around to read any other books on my profile. Again, thank you.
Hey thanks for the follow!
@DavidGibbs6 Congratulations on the 100+ followers! Definitely well deserved and I anticipate more in the future. Keep doing what you do. Wishing you the best :)
A quick thankyou to all the new followers in case I missed someone. Welcome and I hope you enjoy.
@DavidGibbs6 Hi! Just noticed you come from Adelaide too! How bout that? :)
@elveloy Actually I came from the Riverland, but I now reside in Adelaide. I just noticed you won the Sci-Fi Smackdown, good work and you were up against some big names in there. Suitably impressed.
Thank you for reading 'Raiko', it's much appreciated. I'd love to hear your thoughts on it so far :)
You write really well and I love the wordcraft you use. I found it emotional, even in a short space (could be because of my own son) If anything, you could do with a little more description in the last chapter. Chapter three was a little surreal and lacked enough emotional punch. eg If I got that phone call I would go home instantly. I would be out the door and gone. When I got home and found the blood I would be frantic and when they weren't there, then I would turn to jelly, colapse on the floor and cry, closely followed by anger and revenge and a lot of sword slashing and maybe some torture. But that's just me. You have pinned it as a superhero story and as far as origin storys go it's fairly run of the mill, but I think its delivered skillfully enough to pull it off. I'm really interested in what will make it a superhero story and I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep it up, you have the tallent for it.
