DavidMcCormick5

hey,
          	
          	just after some feedback on the first few chapters that I have posted, I will endeavor to update more regularly hopefully once a week going forward, unfortunately, I have been very unwell recently hence why I haven't been updating I look forward to hearing from anyone who has an opinion on what I have written so far.

DavidMcCormick5

hey,
          
          just after some feedback on the first few chapters that I have posted, I will endeavor to update more regularly hopefully once a week going forward, unfortunately, I have been very unwell recently hence why I haven't been updating I look forward to hearing from anyone who has an opinion on what I have written so far.