@shirleynator Hey, thanks for reading, glad you liked it. Have sent it off to a puiblisher so fingers crossed. Ill definitley read your story and comment. Just e-published a book for a friend using amazon, wondering if people on here would be interested in my doing the same for them? just an idea at the moment but might go on one of the forums and sound it out. Anyway, ill go and have a read of your story now, thanks
Dave