I take advice, but please mind the way you deliver them. I am emotionally sensitive and might take everything too seriously. And, I need space to find my own type of writing, (since i AM fresh)  not to please expectation of readers, because all authors are different. Find the one you like or feel comfortable with, instead of shaping them for your own interest and convenience.

 Let small authors grow at their own pace, and in their own style. Don't shove them into a mold where they feel like they have to please everyone that reads. If you don't like the way they write, find another book, another author. 

Or, make one yourself.

I hope my tone doesn't scare away worthy readers, and that it's clear that my intention isn't ill.

I just prioritize the voice of authors, because too much of 'advice' that are not delivered gently-or considerately, might shut down authors that have great potential. They just need to find it at their own pace.

my writing will get better (I promise and hope so)

I like books, Lloyd, COFFEE, shower thoughts, making plot for no reason, and imagining myself in the realm of Ninjago before bed :))

I guess I'm nice, I'm not violent at least, i don't hit first, but I know how to defend myself. They (my class mates) call me quiet just because I don't say unimportant stuff. To them, I'm weird because I'm different (WE LOVE ZANE).

thats about it!