@DayanFCT1
HE'S ALIVE
@darkknight965 Damn. I just noticed, it's gone. There's literally barely any gory scene or Lelei getting her head crushed or smth. Wattpad sucks. Maybe you should try posting in other websites? Like Ao3, FFN, etc?
@darkknight965 I woke up from the dead and wattpad decided to celebrate that by REMOVING my rewrite lol.
Hello Dayan, still alive?
Yo any updates?
@DayanFCT1 Hey, at least your marines in the story aren't actively trying to starve civilians and the air-force isn't using unguided bombs 60% of the time then citing they're doing "precision strikes".
@ChaoticallyGood_M23 IDF done stole my story ideas with their human rights violation lmao.
Oh shit, well It's understandable why you want to stand down for now lol.
Excuse me. I hear that you are a gate fanfiction writer and I was wondering if you could make a civil war gate book.
RETCON : I changed the Marines' primary plate carrier in From Hell to Sadera, from the crusty-ass old MTV to PC Gen III for extra dose of muh realism. All mentions of MTV vests are now replaced with PC Gen III.
PC Gen III Vest/plate carriers - Lighter, more flexible replacement to the older, clunkier MTV plate carriers. I retconned it, so from now on all prior mentions of MTV vests are now considered PC Gen III instead.
My dear readers, I have a pleasant surprise for you all.
I have rewritten the entire 1st chapter of From Hell to Sadera.
https://www.wattpad.com/1178247003-from-hell-to-sadera-the-bizarre-odyssey-of-bravo
Besides the dialogue, the whole 5000-word chapter had been remade from scratch in a span of two days (quite an impressive feat, I know).
It certainly is an significant improvement of my shittier proses and dialogues back in the days.
I also recommend my dear readers to be reading this improved pilot chapter with the melancholic cover of Teenage Dirtbag by Scala and Kolacny Brothers :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fg7Pk0gFtHg
Thinking of starting a short story series for Summoning America, especially for the background events.
Update?
@GavianNovsa on hiatus, kinda ran out of motivation so I'm resting to recharge my creativity.
Are you interested in suggestions? If so, I have one that you might be interested.
@Bryan3359 the wicker man? Well the original Wicker Man was from 1973. A police officer receives a letter from a small island individual stating that they needed help to find a little girl. He arrives in a seaplane to reach the island so he can start his investigation, however as soon after a few days of his investigation he observers the residents began acting strange. Displaying strange pagan rituals. The leader of the island. The more the policeman learns about the islanders strange practices, the closer he gets to track down the missing girl.
https://discord.gg/fyszSajfJF My co-writer's discord [I shared the server with him]