DayanFCT1

RETCON : I changed the Marines' primary plate carrier in From Hell to Sadera, from the crusty-ass old MTV to PC Gen III for extra dose of muh realism. All mentions of MTV vests are now replaced with PC Gen III.

DayanFCT1

PC Gen III Vest/plate carriers - Lighter, more flexible replacement to the older, clunkier MTV plate carriers. I retconned it, so from now on all prior mentions of MTV vests are now considered PC Gen III instead.
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ChaoticallyGood_M23

Yo any updates?

ChaoticallyGood_M23

@DayanFCT1 Hey, at least your marines in the story aren't actively trying to starve civilians and the air-force isn't using unguided bombs 60% of the time then citing they're doing "precision strikes".
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DayanFCT1

@ChaoticallyGood_M23 IDF done stole my story ideas with their human rights violation lmao.
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ChaoticallyGood_M23

this message may be offensive 
Oh shit, well It's understandable why you want to stand down for now lol.
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Sharktank369

Excuse me. I hear that you are a gate fanfiction writer and I was wondering if you could make a civil war gate book.

Sharktank369

@DayanFCT1 and a ww1 if you can
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Sharktank369

The American civil war
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DayanFCT1

@Sharktank369 what civil war?
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DayanFCT1

RETCON : I changed the Marines' primary plate carrier in From Hell to Sadera, from the crusty-ass old MTV to PC Gen III for extra dose of muh realism. All mentions of MTV vests are now replaced with PC Gen III.

DayanFCT1

PC Gen III Vest/plate carriers - Lighter, more flexible replacement to the older, clunkier MTV plate carriers. I retconned it, so from now on all prior mentions of MTV vests are now considered PC Gen III instead.
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DayanFCT1

My dear readers, I have a pleasant surprise for you all.
          
          I have rewritten the entire 1st chapter of From Hell to Sadera. 
          https://www.wattpad.com/1178247003-from-hell-to-sadera-the-bizarre-odyssey-of-bravo
          
          
          Besides the dialogue, the whole 5000-word chapter had been remade from scratch in a span of two days (quite an impressive feat, I know).
          
          It certainly is an significant improvement of my shittier proses and dialogues back in the days.
          
          I also recommend my dear readers to be reading this improved pilot chapter with the melancholic cover of Teenage Dirtbag by Scala and Kolacny Brothers :
          
          https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fg7Pk0gFtHg

Bryan3359

Are you interested in suggestions? If so, I have one that you might be interested.

Bryan3359

@Bryan3359 the wicker man? Well the original Wicker Man was from 1973. A police officer receives a letter from a small island  individual stating that they needed help to find a little girl. He arrives in a seaplane to reach the island so he can start his investigation, however as soon after a few days of his investigation he observers the residents began acting strange. Displaying strange pagan rituals. The leader  of the island. The more the policeman learns about the islanders strange practices,  the closer he gets to track down the missing girl.
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DayanFCT1

@Bryan3359 Maybe not right now, but I think I'll let you explain. What is it though.
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DayanFCT1

I'm on hiatus for 3-5 days, tops, I'm not feeling really well. Don't worry, I don't have Covid, just normal fever after spending too much times at school running under blazing hot sun.

pep002

@lmaoooyou nice
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DayanFCT1

@pep002 don't worry I'm back, writing chapters rn
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pep002

Get better soon your writing is good
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