DaynishferHansdah

Heyyy everyone, 
          	              How are you all and how's life? 
          	Mine going busy and boring as usual, definitely not getting any time to read all the books in my library. I miss all of them soo much especially those new updates about the stories. 
          	              Now I have to re-read all those books again, what in the helll....... Damnnnnnnnnn.............. Meeeeee.

DaynishferHansdah

Heyyy everyone, 
                        How are you all and how's life? 
          Mine going busy and boring as usual, definitely not getting any time to read all the books in my library. I miss all of them soo much especially those new updates about the stories. 
                        Now I have to re-read all those books again, what in the helll....... Damnnnnnnnnn.............. Meeeeee.

ValTron25

Bummer about the one book... but it is kind of the wattpad way. May i recommend Lair of Beast by Jeanine Croft. She usually is great about updates with her other stories. This one in particular is complete. Also too, stories by WhiskeyQueenn. She's just amazing. I started with Odin's Prize but that is her newest, the story line really starts earlier in her other books, but all so good!!!

Shards0fGlass

Thank you for all the votes on A Thousand Year Obsession! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

DaynishferHansdah

@Secrets_NeverSeen That helped me a lot cause this is my first book and i'm new to writing something like a story.
            
             You can say i'm on a beginner level, as i was stuck while writing the prophecy as in chapter4 due to re editing chapters cause it was not very clear what i'm writing about in the story as you can see now if you have read my chapters from 4 onwards. 
            
            Thank You very much.
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Shards0fGlass

@Secrets_NeverSeen Of course. 
            
            First, you should add either 'a' or 'the' before lunar eclipse, 'the' if it's a specific known event, 'a' if it could be any lunar eclipse. Add 'the' before whole realm. And a girl will 'be' born. 
            Also, (this is entirely optional) if you want to make the second sentence more direct, say, "She'll help unite the different realms and bring peace to the war which has been ongoing for centuries." 
            If you want, you can add 'and' between 'the choices she makes' and 'the path she follows', but you don't have to. It just depends on what flow you prefer. And to make the last bit more concise, you can phrase it, "of whole realms for she is the chosen one." It'll just cut out unnecessary words so it doesn't seem like a run-on sentence.
            
            Hope that helped.
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DaynishferHansdah

@Secrets_NeverSeen i want to ask a favour from you. Can you help me by reading this and tell me how to correct it if some corrections have to be made .
            
            "On the night of lunar eclipse, when whole realm will drown in darkness, a girl will born with blessings bestowed upon her.
            She'll help in the unification of different realms and bringing peace to the war which have been going on for centuries. 
            The choices she makes, the path she follows will decide the future of whole realms along with her, as she is the chosen one. "
            
            If you get confused please read my story till chapter 3 and give some guidance cause i really need one right now.
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