Dceramoje

Hi guys! 
          	
          	Prime Dreamer's Chapter 4 is Up.
          	Tell me what you think about it.
          	
          	Enjoy Reading!
          	
          	https://my.w.tt/FWXUFphLJ7

AVSupportAccount

Keep writing!❤

AVSupportAccount

@AVSupportAccount You're always welcome! Masaya ako dahil natulungan kita. Approach me if you need anything. Thank you!❤❤❤
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Dceramoje

@AVSupportAccount Thank you, this make me smile.
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rineia

Hi! I hope you could try reading my stories under the name of this series, "Way back series". Votes and comments are highly appreciated. Thank you and godbless!
          
          Series: Way Back Series
          
          1. Where it all Started (Completed)
          2. Heart Speaks (On-going)
          3. Chances and Trust(On-going/Slow update)
          4. *soon*
          5. *soon*

Immanuel_Rine

Hi! You ask me to critique your story and after reading the first three chapters, I'm speechless. Seriously, you are a good writer. I love the plot. It is a fantasy with a mix of romance. The male lead which is Sky, has a strong character development while the girl Prime has less description so I couldn't imagine her features but I can already conclude her personality because you strongly deliver it thou. It was clean. You know a lot about technicalities. Well, it was unedited, given it has lots of typos. 
           No plot holes. The transition is smooth. Your english is great. Well, just watch out for diction. You are very descriptive, I love it. 
           Well I don't know why the hell it has less reads when in fact you nailed the story. I'm amazed there is an underrated writer here who has good writing skills and healthy brain cells. Continue to write it, I'm hooked. I wish they ended up even they are in two different worlds. I'm expecting a twist. 
            Keep up author. You don't need to ask for critique cause you are already good.

Dceramoje

@Immanuel_Rine Good Morning Thank You for reading and also for the feedback about my stoty. It really makes my heart melt. sobrang saya ko po kasi nagustuhan nyo po ang story. I hope I can continue to reach your expectation. I'm sorry I can't put my feelings into word, about your message. Again thank you and Godbless.
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Dceramoje

Hi guys! I'm done publishing the Prologue of my first story, hopefully not the last. 
          So, if you're looking for something to read, you can visit and read it, highly appreciated. 
          I am also open to CONSTRUCTIVE criticisms since, this is my first time writing a story. 
          
          Thank You and GodBless