Rockbeatspunk17

Hi there, sweetie pie. 
          Sorry to take a little bit of your time, but could you kindly check my good friend's story? She's a Romanian writer trying to make it into the world of English stories, giving her best to improve and could you use some feedback from experienced and talented writers.  Would you like to give it a try? There's only one chapter.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/235295586-w-o-n-d-e-r-l-a-n-d-killers