Deagerjhone

Guys this is the story I write with my sister please go and check it out I just know you all will like it thank for your support...
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/154794483

angelrashmi

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I read a few chapters of "the love of my life" and couldn't stop myself from writing this to u...... Do u even know the PAIN OF A RAPE VICTIM,  what they go through, the depression, the humiliation, the fear and not to mention their virtue. Just how PATHETICALLY u have shown that a guy rapes a girl in his REVENGE becoz she spilled juice on his suit and then threatens her to leave her city and family and then further makes her his MISTRESS when she is PREGNANT with HIS CHILD and keeps RAPING her for MONTHS and one fine day he suddenly realizes that he should let her go and girl realises that ohh she LOVES him becoz she THINKS HE IS KIND and had a horrible past (WOW.... SERIOUSLY???  ALL HIS ACTIONS ARE JUSTIFIED JUST BECAUSE A GIRL DENIED HIM) but he again denies her..... Then suddenly out of nowhere he comes after few days to get her back and she FORGIVES him and gives him a chance.... Why?? Because he is the father of her child and she did not wanted her child fatherless..... Seriously??? I would rather be a single mother than have a rapist as my husband and father of my child.  I just couldn't continue with the story more than this...... All through the 8 chapters that I have read just made me CRINGE and SUPER ANGRY....... Did you not get anything better than this to make fun of a rape victim. When I read the description, I thought its a nice concept..... U would show a woman's pain and man's regret after the rape. My boyfriend shows more regret than arnav even if he has just shouted on me in anger. I am hoping u would understand what I am trying to say and make changes in the story. 

Arshistan

Hey dear! Since you are as much of an Arshi fan as I am mind checking out my work on the couple? If you do then please share your views with me. It'll help. Thank you♥️

Arshistan

@Deagerjhone Thank you dear❤️❤️
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Deagerjhone

@Arshistan I will dear I am sure your works will be great
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RehanaSiraj

Can u read mine new story twisted love... With arshi  main couple.. do share ur views if u find it interesting
          
          https://my.w.tt/R2zI8ZTwwN

Deagerjhone

@arshiabigya sure and your more than welcome 
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RehanaSiraj

@Deagerjhone thank u...and do share t with ur frndz if u find it worth reading.... 
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Deagerjhone

@arshiabigya i will read it i am sure it will be amazing...
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