so i made lyrics for a flower girl version of flower man, i need to know if they’re good here they are (you can look up the original lyrics). Here “the burl” is replacing “him” and a burl on a tree is usually formed from something being injured. “him” i assume refers to asgore so i’m calling him a burl because of the stuff going on with him and toriels possible divorce. “to watch the whole wide world as it spoils” i changed the meaning of the line. normally im pretty sure it’s talking about flowery just yknow watching the world from his glass case. how i changed it “the world” is asgore since he takes care of the flowers and they’d obviously think of him and the centre of their world. and the “as it spoils” part is as we go through chapter five we can see asgore’s attitude decrease so ye that’s just some explanation otherwise other changes are so stuff rhymes :3
Ten feet twenty the Flower Girl
Is waiting for a touch, her hands unfurled
Straightening petals out, her stomach curled
Like the every daily
Wish that bothers the Flower Girl
Could I do something to make the burl laugh
Inside my little chamber made of glass
So she lived the
Flower Girl, Flower Girl
With her heart in the soil
So she stands
To watch the whole wide world
As it spoils
Way up high in the sky
With the sun in her eyes
Ain't it nice
The life forever for
Flowers
Ten feet twenty the Flower Girl
Is waiting for a touch, her hands unfurled
Fallen to pieces with her feelings whirled
Yet the every daily
Hope that powered the Flower Girl
Would never cower off a swirl path
Even if broken I am more than glass
So she lived the
Flower Girl, Flower Girl
With her heart in the soil
So she stands
To watch the whole wide world
As it spoils
Way up high in the sky
With the sun in her eyes
Ain't it nice
The life forever for
Flowers