In response to SabiElectric, it's really good to hear different perspectives about the series and its future! Yes, I completely agree with you. In the first book, the plot seemed a bit weak and now I feel like it was going up and down with irrelevant events. Grammar on the other hand, I was astonished with the way it was produced. I know I have good grammar, but of course I was too worried about getting the job done, and publishing the chapter right after writing.
That my friend is a very big no-no.
I feel so embarrassed by the way I created that story for the whole world to see. I now know my weaknesses, and this time I will fight them!
Also, after a few days of brainstorming, I have concluded that I will rewrite the entire story. I will take pieces from the first draft, but I do not promise that it will be the same from the first copy. I will say it now, everything from the book was entirely... bad.
Sadly, I decided within the struggling hours of thinking that I will cut LWTC into two books. I have other ideas that I would like to express in other fandoms, and I do not want to focus entirely on the Creatures. I mean, I love the Creatures dearly but I DO NOT want my fans to think that my profile consists only to the Creatures.
I personally do not want that, I want variety.
So, in conclusion, I will rebuild "Living with...the Creatures?". No more dry and low qualities, but with more perfections with less faults. I have matured with my Fangirl behavior(in which I partly blame for my sense of writing on WP). I feel much better that I am doing this to better my weaknesses. I also appreciate the thought from others. Thank you!
I am ready to rock and I am glad that you all will be with me every step of the way!
To better faults and more creativity! Lets do it!
-Ananda(@DeathHelix)