DeathSavage1231

I just was wondering if you plan to write any more "Predator" stories, just because the one that I did read from you was really good, well writtride

It just felt like kids came too quickly in storyline especially since she was also left behind by Death after kids were 2 and didn’t return with Morning for another 3 whole years. Expected they’d try to return within a month if such mating bond and family bonds so strong. Why the delay and surely she would have given up on their return after more than one year. Why being such a fighter would he not fight with his everything to return to his precious mate even if unaware of pregnancy???? So many unanswered questions and possibilities for opportunity to continue and expand on the current storyline. Like maybe she wasn’t pregnant whilst during book 2 so Morning could come to terms with just how exceptional his a Hunter his mate had become. She could have just been struggling with abandonment, grief and stress during book 2 and Death took her on as struggling depressed and weak Ooman, turning her into strong fighter Hunter she is plus the Special visitation from Gods making her Unique Princess type revered by the Yautja. Then with the 5 year return of Morning who had to win his mate back from abandoning her, then she becomes pregnant but is kidnapped back on his planet as she becomes legend of gods with him and her having to fight to get back to one another. Just a suggestion but something similar seems to fit with storyline of book 1. Plus options for more sequels?????
          Regardless, highly enjoyable reading. Your a talented author and hope to read a lot more. 

Hi. I just finished binging on books 1 & 2 of Life With A Yautja. They were fantastic. You definitely have creative talent as an author, no matter if it has vague foundation on fanfic. The world and descriptions of everything in it and its storyline were so easy to become immersed in, well Done!
          
          My only disappointment was how quick Little Fury’s pregnancy went and not knowing the reason for Morning not coming back to her sooner (even if he had trouble locating her as she moved). But it sad he not only didn’t know of pregnancy or get to share in it. I also don’t understand why Death left her on Earth. Why would she stay if had nothing left and government so obviously a threat to her while pregnant as well as to the children in future. It would have been good to see them reunite earlier and have some of the funny moments of him dealing with his pregnant Ooman and freaking out about the whole dad of twins thing and watching a rampaging mum-To-be. As well as hoped to see/read about them leaving earth behind and adjusting to new world together with his Yautja clan while preparing for birth and new family.
          
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Hey I'm Mary Ivey and I was just wondering when u are going to update the story a life with a yautja child. I'm almost done to where it would say that u updated it in April this year. Was just wondering if all cause it's really interesting story so far and can't wait till it's updated again 

Hey read your 049 story are you going to make a sequel or prequel 

Hey read your 049 story are you going to make a sequel or prequel 

Hey I loved your Predator book. ^-^ will there be a sequel?

Hey just started a new story come have a look https://www.wattpad.com/story/186524844