DeathbyDemons_x3

Please post any comments you would like about my story. I don't care if it is negative, it will only encourage me to fix things up. Thanks all..!! 
          Love, 
          Twi<3

I cry scarlet tears of blood,
          when you left..
          now i'm over come with regret,
          my heart rots away in the ashes of hell,
          swallowed by a corpses shell,
          knowing that you'll never care..never shed a tear,
          the love I had for you..
          now a worthless memory...my words unspoken...
          forever drowning in the ashes of hell