@DeathlyJazzHands55
I decided to change a part of the chapter 7 edit because it didn't sit right with me.
To clarify, it has to do with the bit explaining why Luz didn't just go to jail and instead was given house arrest and all that jazz.
The re-edit of Chapter 7 of All For Luz is up. Continuity is slowly being restored lol. Also, in case anyone missed it, instead of just explaining what happened with Amber regarding the infamous "incident", I decided to write out the scene. Why? Because I've become a believer in the whole "Show, don't tell" philosophy when it comes to important events. It also shows the divide between "normal" Luz and "psycho" Luz. At least, early on, anyway.
I am so beyond pissed right now. I was working on the next edit for Chapter 7, and then, all of the sudden, Word crashes. Like, UGGGGHHH! Whatever, all that means is that my continuity corrections and edits are going to take another day, so there won't be a new chapter on the fifth as planned.
@DeathlyJazzHands55 I think Amber got hit by karma! Scarred badly by Luz, then burned to death, and her corpse turned into a Nomu!
@Sakumon18 Yeah, and it's also supposed to show just how fucked up the stuff Luz was forced to go through at that school. I was growing kinda tired with how there were some people who believed that what Luz went through didn't warrant that kind of violent reaction. Frankly, I was debating even confirming a few things that were done, but I hope it paints a better picture as to why Amber deserved what she got, and what happened to her in the end.
Dude... The amount of continuity errors that are in Season 1 is unreal. Anyway, I'm half way done through cleaning things up.
@DeathlyJazzHands55 All the stuff regarding Camila and Luz's relationship and the severity of it all. The entire ordeal with the court sentence. How Luz was locked in her bedroom, and it never being mentioned at all. To name a few
Btw, I'm cleaning up continuity errors in All For Luz. Might take a bit, a day or two at most. (I am aware this is the first thing I said before the rewrite started, but believe me, I am *not* doing that shit again)
Improved the Hunter V. Luz fight.
@Sakumon18 Fixing grammatical errors mostly, and giving better descriptions to things that desperately needed it.
Do you take story suggestions?
This is for fans of All For Luz:
Just thought I would fill you guys in on a couple things. I would like to point out that there has been a change of plans regarding a couple of things. I won't be outlining everything, but I will be stating these ones because they are important.
1. I am going to have to delay the start of Season 3 to APRIL 5th. I didn't want it. This is due to schedule conflict with my other stories and also so that I don't feel too much pressure to rush one thing out over the other. Also, I didn't want to release it on April Fools day since that would be tacky.
2. My original plans for Season 3 have changed drastically. What HASN'T changed is that Amity is still going to be the main protagonist. What HAS changed is the over all plot to include certain things that will go without mention due to spoilers.
3. The original plans that I had for the Mutant Realm Saga have been scrapped in their entirety for something else. For those who wanted to know what the original plan was, it was for Toshiko/Luz to go to the Mutant Realm and essentially follow out the events of the MHA Manga with various differences as the main antagonist. Amity would also be there and would serve as one of Izuku's mentors due to her possessing a version of One For All that acts much like his version. This has since changed for not only pacing reasons but also for bloat, as, for as much as I love All For Luz, I don't want to be writing it into my thirties.
With all of this said, if you have any questions, feel free to ask them here or DM me on Fanfiction Dot Net. Otherwise, that's all for me for now. I'm sorry for the inconvenience.
Also, I'll plug this for however many times I can, but please go read Gamer Of The Multiverse.
Have a good rest of your day. Stay safe.
@DeathlyJazzHands55 And one more thing about the plans changed dramatically from what you originally planned has not changed, and the fact that I hope that apart from Amity, you have left unchanged the fact that Toshiko/Luz is a villain in this story. She is not a hero. At best she's an Anti-Hero and not an Anti-Hero like how Deadpool is an Anti-Hero, an Anti-Hero like how Venom is an Anti-Hero—and not Marvel Movie Venom, I mean Comic Book Venom. Those are two very different beasts. At worst, she's a miniature All For One in terms of villains, and we all know how vile that bastard can be from time to time. You can reply if you're still here. Like you said in the notes to Chapter 26: Season 2 - Episode 13: Hero No More - Part 2! I also hope to see Toshiko Shigaraki in MHA and how she will become the Main Antagonist for Izuku Midoriya and the entire upcoming the Mutant Realm Saga despite the changes in your plans! After all, the MHA Saga will still be right? I hope you will give your answer today! And tell us in detail exactly how your plans for this story has changed since Season 3, when you start The Boiling Isles Saga on April 5th!
@DeathlyJazzHands55 I got your Message on Ao3 and can say only what I said there: I'm sorry if I overreacted, it's just unpleasant to see the author changing his point of view because of the opinions of others who have nothing to do with this story as a whole. I thought that was your case. I'm sorry again! But we still hope to see Toshiko Shigaraki in MHA and how she will become the Main Antagonist for Izuku Midoriya and the entire upcoming the Mutant Realm Saga despite the changes in your plans! After all, the MHA Saga will still be right? I hope you will give your answer today! And tell us in detail exactly how your plans for this story have changed since Season 3, when you start The Boiling Isles Saga on April 5th!
@DeathlyJazzHands55 Why not stick to your original plan for The Mutant Realm instead of listening to others? This is YOUR story and do it exactly as you originally intended! Even if one of your author friends doesn't like it, to hell with them, do what you wanted to do for this story from the beginning! You're the author of your story, not them! You should only listen to their opinion and not change your plans for your story too much because of their criticism of the plot or for fear of "bloating" the plot (which is good for me and shows how much the author loves his own creation and his readers)! After all, you can hardly write this story for more than nine years before your thirties, as you say! And by the way, happy Birthday to you! We're still going to see The Mutant Realm Saga despite your changes of plans, right? And that Toshiko will become the main antagonist in the MHA Saga, as you originally planned, even despite the changes you will make to the plot starting from Season 3! I think many, if not all, want to see Toshiko Shigaraki, who has grown up for 5 years, end up in MHA after everything she has been through The Human and Demon Realms Sagas and influence the plot of MHA Manga/Anime with various differences at your discretion and become the Main Antagonist and Arch-enemy for Izuku, Amity, AllMight, Bakugo and the entire Class 1-A in general! And if you don't want to write All For Luz for so long, which is frankly a bit insulting, then try to write it more often than your other projects or "cut" some moments from upcoming Arches./The sagas of this story. Again, I hope that you will still achieve everything you have in mind in The Mutant Realm Saga, which is what everyone has been waiting for from this crossover since its release! We believe in you, author, and wish you good luck!
Thank you all for the kind messages! Means a lot!
@DeathlyJazzHands55 im honestly bummed because it doesn’t get the recognition it deserves since you put WAY too much effort into a chapter
I am now 21 years old... Yippee.
