Debbie

No worries. I'm planning to read to the end so if there is anything specific you want thoughts on let me know. 
          If you ever need another beta give me a shout too. Happy to help out.

Thanks for the feedback, dearie. Now that I muddled through finishing the draft it means a lot. Especially when i edit :)

Hi! 
          Thanks for stopping by. I'm fine (apart from not being very successful on the writing front) how are you doing?

Just stopping by to say hi! Hope all is well :)

I never really thought of it as a romance. Guess there are elements though. Thanks for letting me know.

Night cafe is featured on ADOR :) exciting!

You are awesome! Thanks so much. :)

You're welcome. I may post some of gothic, but not yet. I'll message you when I do.

@Debbie_e Aww, thanks. That makes total sense. I know I need to edit it way more than I have in its posted form. I've been trying to iron out and fix some of the plot holes and the other things (which you are so awesome at pointing out in all your comments) get over looked. Looks like i will be stock piling your feedback once more for when I have more time to edit. You rock. :) Ps...post Gothic? 

You don't suck at third person. Just don't head jump. I dunno, stay in Chase's head until he starts talking to Avery and then have a page break or something and stay in Avery's head?
          Or try and do third person omniscent rather than third person limited. If you crack that let me know. I've tried and I just can't manage it at all.