DebraJean37

@tess-tessdemon I went back to your story and re-read it.  I agree with you, my comment was a bit stilted.  I am sorry for that.  I meant to say that I loved your writing, characters, and explanations.  I do like your story.  I guess I was just a little over whelmed.  You gave Saul different actions - very different - than I would have!  Because of his actions and the quickness of the happenings I was shocked.  You took an angel and gave him attributes that I would never thought of. Just because we have differing views there is no reason for me to not recognize the story as a good and well written one!        Debra Jean

misskaydawkins

Uhm... I know this is random but I never got a chance to fully thank you for your comment on my story. Honestly thank sooooo much! Yours I felt was one of the realist comments I've ever received on this website and brought a lot of insight to my story that I thought I over looked. It really meant alot to me. So again thank you very much for taking the time to even read what was just a whole bunch of rambling then (I've practically changed everything since) and providing your feedback. 'Twas very much appreciated :)
          
          ~ Kaylin D.

someone123

@DebraJean37 It's no problem at all! Why are you surprised? You are like the best TJAI commenteer ever. I don't think you realise how many times I've read your comment on Chapter 6 because it just makes me smile like a silly little girl :D 
          
          So yeah, I think you deserved the dedication :D Your support is so amazing so thank you so much for it. Thanks for supporting the series and me and I'm really glad you're enjoying it so much. Your last comment on Chapter 7 has sparked some ideas, so, thank you :D
          
          Ana

TerryP

Hi again.  I just came on Wattpad.  A symbol is displayed showing that perhaps you are reading my story now.  It's okay if you're not.  In the last week I have consulted a medial authority and changed the beginning of Section IV radically, and it led to changes in Section VI (Candlelight Dinner scene), VII is more playful now,  VIII has been tweeked a bit.  Thanks for staying with it.   

TerryP

Thanks, Debra.  My Liberia story setting is the village of my Peace Corps service.  See bowillie.hawa.com.  Gallery 3, Row 5, 2d picture left: Lisa's house  (my former residence) has 5 rooms. No fruit trees now, no grass now.  David lives in the 3d (4th) house, also a former Peace Corps house. Once shady, it had no cast-off machinery.  Here you see what my characters see in my story.  As many of us loved it, so do they.