@DeeRife Oh no! Don't feel that way, there's always room for improvement. I really enjoyed your fanfiction, Impending Storm, and would have loved to see where it led.
But, if you think this is best, I think taking a hiatus may be a good way to rethink writing. Finding writing styles is hard (I've gone through probably ten in the nine years I've been writing) and getting readers to follow along with your work even harder, so I know what it feels like to want to give up. I wish you luck in your endeavours, whatever they may be, and hope you find what you are looking for (: