TalesBySoph

Oh and if you would like more readers, I recommend making a more detailed bio, like who they are, what do they have together, and make it end like a cliff hanger like “was this a match made in heaven... or hell?” That should get people intrigued by the bio. :)

TalesBySoph

Hi, I read a comment of you asking for feed back on your story, I would recommend you start the story off with more detail and context, because you started on she was going to something like party, I think you should start it off with, like who she is and maybe the other characters. I was quite confused reading the first chapter. But if you don’t wanna start it with who she is, definitely  introduce her slowly in the next chapters. Just remember to include good detail and context!! :) hope this helped!