Dekiru66

Gonna write a parody story based on @Crimsonsector89 's "Every Betrayed Jaune Arc story" That's just me deconstructing and shitting on these kinds of stories.
          	
          	I can already see my main challenges is writing badly on purpose.

Galaxyleo3467

@Dekiru66 Oh so your saying that dust bullets have a chance at wearing down PASGT armor easily? Also do you know RWBY Evermore? There is a faction that is the reason why the white fang was formed in that fan series and I think they can be a great faction to add in Operation Corolando Crossroads (forgive me if I spelled it wrong)
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Dekiru66

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@Galaxyleo3467 
          	  Again, just because it won't penetrate doesn't make it any less deadly.
          	  
          	  PASGT wasn't good armour either, the vest was designed for fragmentation, while it can protect from pistol rounds up to 9mm, it sure as shit could not take rifle rounds.
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Galaxyleo3467

@Dekiru66 I heard it from a discussion about dust vs gunpowder and from seeing how dust bullets hit grimm and grimm shrugging off lots of dust bullets shot from assault rifles, I saw how dust bullets effects the things they hit like how a ice dust bullet would create ice on the place where the bullet impacted I guess its more like a dust crystal core instead of a lead core for dust bullets that explodes or expands when it hits something although I still believe that dust bullets don't have good penetration capabilities (given how one hit a stationary ceramic bowl and all it did was tip the bowl over and no one was holding the bowl to enhance its durability with aura)
          	  
          	   And I acknowledge your statement of dust rounds still being dangerous, a bullet is still a bullet, but dust bullets won't do crap against PASGT with their poor penetration anyway, I hardly believe that it would cause the same pain as non armor piercing bullets and I mean dust bullets are crap compared to the 45 ACP, the only type of dust bullets that would be problematic against PASGT armor is Fire, Lightning and Ice Dust Bullets, given those bullets don't need penetration because they can just burn, electrocute/shock or freeze the PASGT armor and the wearer.
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NygyleEleccion

Hello will you continue writing jaune arc story?

Commando_Kings

@Dekiru66 i hope you can gain the motivation to write again, Operation Coronade Crossroad is one of the fanfiction that give me Inspiration for one of my fanfictions, You've my support :)
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NygyleEleccion

@Dekiru66 I see. Well, I hope you will gain the will to write, maybe we can give you ideas for your stories 
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Dekiru66

@NygyleEleccion I hope I can, I've lost the will to write anything since January.
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quangnm1512

Hey man, I need some advice.

Dekiru66

@quangnm1512 Alright, it's good to go.
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quangnm1512

I'm done with the story, just need you to check it again. Better safe than sorry.
            https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oU6ynbfWexoiDCPJv4tBlr5DFq1KQvz4-8Ms2Ul6AVk/edit?usp=sharing
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Kicker5649

Question when is the new chapter of Operation Crossroads coming out if you don’t mind me asking.

Kicker5649

@Dekiru66 I’m sorry to hear that something happened to you I hope you get better soon.
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Dekiru66

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@Kicker5649 
            I haven't been in a mood to write since a personal tragedy hit me in January and real life bullshit just kept piling up.
            
            So to answer your question, I have no idea. Maybe when I find the spark to start writing again.
            
            Don't forget to give feedback and constructive criticism, it would help to see your honest opinion on my writing.
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TheFlorida-Man

How do you feel about dukes of hazzard

TheFlorida-Man

@Dekiru66 the show is pretty good and it takes place in the south
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Galaxyleo3467

@Dekiru66 When are you going to update Operation: Coronado Crossroads?
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Dekiru66

@TheFlorida-Man Never seen it, but the use of the Confederate flag is questionable.
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Bombast7

I cant wait for your deconstruction. Especialy if its jaune arc being called out for his flaws

Bombast7

I have a few gripes with him. One it was incredibly stupid of him to enter beacon with no combat training or survival skills. He could have gotten himself or/and others killed along with him. He was luky he got teamed with nikos because he probably woundt have survived otherwise. Hell pyrrha had everyright to out him to ozpin because he was a danger to the rest of his teammates  do to lack of training and having cheated his way in. Probaly breaking a law while doing so. Witch could have costed him and his family heavily.
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Dekiru66

@Bombast7 
            As much as I like Jaune, I try my best to be impartial in my stories, so can you list the flaws you perceive in Jaune? I already have a lot of gripes with the average betrayed!Jaune MC being a poorly-hidden author self-insert.
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Dekiru66

Gonna write a parody story based on @Crimsonsector89 's "Every Betrayed Jaune Arc story" That's just me deconstructing and shitting on these kinds of stories.
          
          I can already see my main challenges is writing badly on purpose.

Galaxyleo3467

@Dekiru66 Oh so your saying that dust bullets have a chance at wearing down PASGT armor easily? Also do you know RWBY Evermore? There is a faction that is the reason why the white fang was formed in that fan series and I think they can be a great faction to add in Operation Corolando Crossroads (forgive me if I spelled it wrong)
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Dekiru66

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@Galaxyleo3467 
            Again, just because it won't penetrate doesn't make it any less deadly.
            
            PASGT wasn't good armour either, the vest was designed for fragmentation, while it can protect from pistol rounds up to 9mm, it sure as shit could not take rifle rounds.
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Galaxyleo3467

@Dekiru66 I heard it from a discussion about dust vs gunpowder and from seeing how dust bullets hit grimm and grimm shrugging off lots of dust bullets shot from assault rifles, I saw how dust bullets effects the things they hit like how a ice dust bullet would create ice on the place where the bullet impacted I guess its more like a dust crystal core instead of a lead core for dust bullets that explodes or expands when it hits something although I still believe that dust bullets don't have good penetration capabilities (given how one hit a stationary ceramic bowl and all it did was tip the bowl over and no one was holding the bowl to enhance its durability with aura)
            
             And I acknowledge your statement of dust rounds still being dangerous, a bullet is still a bullet, but dust bullets won't do crap against PASGT with their poor penetration anyway, I hardly believe that it would cause the same pain as non armor piercing bullets and I mean dust bullets are crap compared to the 45 ACP, the only type of dust bullets that would be problematic against PASGT armor is Fire, Lightning and Ice Dust Bullets, given those bullets don't need penetration because they can just burn, electrocute/shock or freeze the PASGT armor and the wearer.
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Dekiru66

Happy New Year to all of you, hopefully the new year ends up being good to us.

Galaxyleo3467

@Dekiru66 Do you know the youtuber by the name of SODAZ? He/she is a youtuber who makes short animated films of fictional warfare, he did some Warhammer 40k animations but were removed, but mostly he/she creates scenes that have strategies, tactics in the fighting, I think you will like the short films SODAZ makes and could give you some inspiration in the next chapters of gulf war arc or perhaps Knight of the Mojave, Ironically SODAZ is making a upcoming Fallout short film animation
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Galaxyleo3467

@Dekiru66 Hey Happy New Year as well, I got a question will there be diplomatic issues that will happen once the kingdoms remnant meets the US Forces and after the US Forces have permanently set their bases in remnant? Will The Current US President during 1991 (Which I believe is George H.W Bush) be involved with the US Forces operating in another world and will the citizens of America and other countries hear about remnant in future chapters?
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Galaxyleo3467

Hey @Dekiru66 does Jaune and the 101st airborne company he was placed in and fought alongside with in the gulf war (What is the name of the company he was placed in?)  have Gulf War Syndrome? Also what were the conflicts or wars, Jaune fought in during his time as a soldier in earth?

Galaxyleo3467

@Dekiru66 will you make the human enemies of remnant, competent? As in being able to hold on their own against the US Forces by using strategies, tactics and the advantages of their advanced technologies/semblances to be able to have a chance against the overwhelming power and strategic/tactical thinking of the US Forces?
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