@SakTheNun It's kind of hard to take what you say nicely, by the way. I have posted a more in-depth response on my story. As well, maybe my writing style just doesn't suit your fancy. I'm not going to change a lot of things in my story because a few people didn't like it. Thanks for reading it, though. :)
@DelicateClay2C7 And I posted an even MORE in-depth response. Haha. I don't know if you know my sister, but she's training in psychology (and for other reasons :P) so it was pretty easy for me to write that response
@SakTheNun It's kind of hard to take what you say nicely, by the way. I have posted a more in-depth response on my story. As well, maybe my writing style just doesn't suit your fancy. I'm not going to change a lot of things in my story because a few people didn't like it. Thanks for reading it, though. :)