His name spurted from her lips as he caused her climax to rip through her. "Danish!" It must've been the way she said it, because something un him changed.
I am currently see one number one pet peeve happen. Why are you planning to be a 40 year old woman when its clear by your writing definitely not that old like I'm not saying that I'm not old I'm never even claim to be older than I am so I don't know why you're doing that... Stop it. x
@Kriksin haha thanks! Fiona and Ben weren't planned, but I loved Ben so I fit him in. I'm glad you like it, I read it for the first time after writing it tonight and I cringed. Deffinately needs editing!! Keep your eyes open for the new version(; xx
hi I just read your book surprise.it was so good incest as well as menage scene came to surprise to me.hope you will write more scenes like that.last chapter was really very good