DeliciousPrincess

Yo. Does anyone wanna be my editor

DeliciousPrincess

I am currently see one number one pet peeve happen. Why are you planning to be a 40 year old woman when its clear by your writing definitely not that old like I'm not saying that I'm not old I'm never even claim to be older than I am so I don't know why you're doing that... Stop it. x

DeliciousPrincess

@Kriksin haha thanks! Fiona and Ben weren't planned, but I loved Ben so I fit him in. I'm glad you like it, I read it for the first time after writing it tonight and I cringed. Deffinately needs editing!! Keep your eyes open for the new version(; xx