MiguelAnderson4
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Hi guys I’ve just published the first five chapters of my new book. It’s something close to my heart and a little different. Please give it a chance and share your honest thoughts—it would mean the world to me as I grow as a writer ✨
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@xxyy_00 I’m currently working on a new book, but I’m still building the story right now. If you’d like to discuss this story more, you can share your email address and I’ll send you an email.
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@xxyy_00 Really thank you for your feedback and suggestions. Since this is my very first story, I was a bit worried that readers might get bored if I wrote very long chapters, so I focused more on describing only the most important scenes. That’s why I didn’t go into too much detail about the mysterious character or the family dinner moments. I truly appreciate your ideas about adding more emotional depth, like the happy family dinner, romantic scenes, and even the wedding and pregnancy. Thank you so much for your kind words, it really means a lot to me. I’m glad you enjoyed the book and found it relatable, especially for teens. Could you tell me a bit more about what you mean by ‘relatable’? I’d love to understand which parts or moments connected with you the most.
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@xxyy_00 and also i love to know your suggestion .
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@xxyy_00 thanks a lot hope you read the second book aas well
ElementalStarlite7
I thoroughly enjoyed your 2nd book with its contrasting light and dark moments. Your creativity and ability to put your thoughts into words is outstanding. Thank you for sharing your gift
Next book. Please
ElementalStarlite7
Forget numbers and remember your passion, creativity and the smile and/or frustration on your face as you put your thoughts to paper. You are an excellent writer and never forget that
Delphi_riddle_black
@ElementalStarlite7 Thank you for the beautiful feedback! It means a lot, especially because I'm a new writer and it can get lonely when the view count is low. I admit I feel sad about it sometimes, but comments like yours give me the strength to not give up. I really hope more people will read it in the future, but for now, I'm just happy you enjoyed it. I'll definitely write more!
ElementalStarlite7
Mele Kalikimaka ️.
Your first book was the Bomb . I’m so glad you reached out as your writing really shines . I comment a lot when stories, ,Ike yours, gets me all Emo, so no mind . Wishing you wonderful day as I sit in the ☀️ and start your next book
Stevon79
Merry Christmas !!