Hey author, I know you are a newbie here. Trust me you have got an amazing story, and writing skills. I am not getting time to comment rn, but i will surely do once I am free. And this is my comfort novel. I always read it when I am down, and have low expectations with life. wait, till your story blows up. It's going to touch millions of views. Till then don't get disheartened and keep writing. Lots of love.
Regards,
Your reader.