Hey,
Firstly, I just want to say thanks for the follow! I hope you do update 'Week in the Sewers with Jeff the killer' because it seems like a really cool story and I want to read more. The introductory paragraph got me hooked. I would love some more descriptions of the characters in your story, just so I can get to know them better and I think it would make the story flow more. Keep writing!
Tori.