DemiWantsThe1D

can you please read the first chapter of my fanfiction and tell me what you think

@ZamyahMalik Thank you! It means a lot :) And I'll definitely work on taking your advice and I'll try to update soon

@DemiWantsThe1D honey I'm reading ur story and in all honesty its pretty good. I think u should defiantly continue with it. The only thing that u would suggest would be to try to use more descriptive words to explain and convey ur ideas. But all in all ur a good writer and I would love to see where ur story goes from here so please keep at it and don't let anything get in ur way. 

Thinking about writing a story!!! Just sucks that I bet nobody will read it lol