DemonJay69

Okay thanks I just thought I’d ask but do you know the author

@Alex85194 It no longer exists unfortunately or actually, thankfully it doesn't. 

@Gereld_spoonsman24 Not really. I got bored of purposely reading trash on this site, so I've kinda just gone back into writing and reading actual good stories.

@tanzsu_makgiuo i warn you

@tanzsu_makgiuo Please do.

@DemonJay69 if you want i think i can find it and show you it

That you for the advice I slow down in later chapters

@Kajler2 Also your toes aren't long they're just skinny. 

@Kajler2 So I've read up to the eighth chapter and the only thing that annoys me is how fast you move through the plot.
            
            In chapter 3 the main character wakes up a week after the entrance exam and suddenly at chapter 4 we're already at the fricken USJ arc. 
            
            Then while chapter 6 takes place before the school festival chapter 7 takes place in the middle of the tournament. Which means skipping the obstacle race and calvary battle. You did the same thing in the USJ arc by skipping to where All might fights Nemu.
            
            So in short your story does kinda grind my gears a bit. Not to the extent to where I'm pissed but enough that I'm annoyed and bored of reading. 

@yeetboi2499 B O I

@DemonJay69 OwO

@DemonJay69 not gonna bother with this 

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@MrSkywalker69 Wow thank you!

yes

@VitoriaPereiraTrappV What, is it gone? Or when am gonna update it?
            
            If it's updates you're looking for, all I can say is yes it is gonna hapen.