Hey, bro!
Thanks for all the comments.
I know my story was more or less in the start, since I was really noob at actually writing at the time, but I like to think that I have evolved since then.
Your feedback is appreciated, and it was because of some comments like yours that made me want to create some new scenarios instead of just going with the anime's plot.
I'm still learning, so I hope you stick around to see what changes I make, and don't stop giving me your feedback.
Peace ✌️