Desi Nickrent

I just started a new book! Feel free to take a look and see how it is! https://www.wattpad.com/story/78752441

Hey......I'm a new writer, i just came out with something and im trying to get people to read it.....could you maybe try 
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/4018293-saved-by-an-angel-or-devil