Almus's Gift is the first novel that I am currently writing. I hold my religious beliefs (Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints) close to heart and desired to write a book based on my own experiences. Yes, the events that take place have obviously never happened. Yet the wisdom that many characters share with Almus and the emotions that Almus shows are relevant to me. The main message of this story is self-responsibility, change, and a fathers love. Although there are some with whom he is not well pleased, I'm a firm believer that God truly loves his children unconditionally nevertheless. If you take the time to thoroughly read through my story and share some input I would be most grateful. Constructive criticism is always welcomed in my heart. For a bonus, I will also commit to reading your work if you so desire. Favor for a favor! :)
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Story by Derek Hayes
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Almus's Gift
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To have the ability to feel everyone's emotions and see their auras can be rather oppressive. After experienc...