Hello ! I just read your lemon book and.... Girl ! That was great ! It seemed like you were not confident in your work but I'm the reader and believe me, it made me shiver ! But yeah, the story was not perfect (the chapters were short, the sentences piled up (you should think about putting some spaces between paragraphs) and the description wasn't enough) so yeah, the way you wrote your chapters wasn't all good butttttttt it wasn't all bad either, and that's what really matters ! I liked it ! And I hope you improve! I'm definitely following you, just in case you post another chapter or a new book ! Keep it up !