Deserthelicopter
La Morte is the first story I've finished and been proud of. Right now I'm revising and editing the story in hopes of it being published. But I need help from those of you that read it, I need critixism what did you like about the story? What didn't you like? What should I change? Should I add more details? It would mean a lot to me if you messaged me or commented on the actual story.